To Epilogue Or Not to Epilogue

As you know, I am preparing my latest work, An Interrupted Proposal, for publishing. It is currently with the editor, but I have also received feedback from readers. One of the requests I received was for an epilogue and it got me thinking. For years, I heard that writers should not write epilogues, but readers of some genres (especially JAFF and romance) seem to expect them.

So, what exactly is an epilogue? According to Mirriam-Webster, it is “a concluding section that rounds out the design of a literary work.” Wikipedia is a bit more thorough: “An epilogue or epilog is a piece of writing at the end of a work of literature, usually used to bring closure to the work.”

There are pros and cons to epilogues, but their main purpose is, as Wikipedia noted, to bring closure by revealing what happened to the characters. Part of this might be showing how characters changed based on the events of the story. They might even set up a sequel (and we have to pray the author actually wrote it). In addition, they can tie up loose threads, but many people see this as “sloppy” writing if the author was unable to tie those up in the main story.

I like to focus on the first and primary purpose. They are like those bits of bio at the end of “based on a true story” movies that tell us what happened to the characters we became so invested in over the previous couple of hours. The fact that the readers have come to care for the characters so much that they don’t want to stop reading when the main story is over can be taken as a great compliment. Isn’t that why there are so many JAFF stories out there? We can’t bear to stop reading about Jane Austen’s well-crafted characters. We want to know everything: every action, every milestone, every thought, every high, and every low.

That said, there are some who skip the epilogues (and some who complain about them in reviews). They aren’t for everyone. Some authors don’t write them, and some write more than one in every book. There doesn’t seem to be a set rule, and everyone has their own opinion.

For the most part, I write epilogues because I know it is what the readers want. The first epilogue I wrote was in my second book, Behind the Mask, (there is an epilogue in The Ball at Meryton now, but it was not in the original edition).

I felt like I needed to tell everything and mapped out everyone’s children and who they married, etc. I thought I had covered it all until my neighbor demanded an explanation of how two characters had ended up marrying and, to appease her, I was forced to write Mistress Mary and the General.

And, yes, I am guilty of setting up for another book in a series and then not following through (Caroline Bingley stopped talking to me when I tried to make her too much like Elizabeth, and A Soldier’s Tale is still in the TBW file). Although I do not like to leave loose threads, sometimes I enjoy it when some little tidbit that was written off as “oh, well, we may never know” is clarified in the epilogue – especially if it is at the very end.

So, will there be an epilogue for An Interrupted Proposal? To be completely honest, I don’t know what more to say. I think this time we are just going to close the door on Lizzy and Darcy and let them enjoy their uninterrupted time. (Unless someone has an idea that kindles my creativity on this one.) (**While reviewing this to post, I might have come up with an idea – let me see what comes of it. 😉 )

What are your thoughts on epilogues? Are you in the “I gotta have it” group, the “I can take it or leave it” group, or the “I don’t even bother reading them” group?

Next month I will be doing a cover reveal! (Sending a HUGE thank you to Summer Hanford for coming to my rescue!) See you then!

27 responses to “To Epilogue Or Not to Epilogue”

  1. Maria K Morgan Thomas Avatar
    Maria K Morgan Thomas

    I like most epilogues but I don’t enjoy when their only purpose is to set up the next book. I especially dislike if it is the first chapter of the next book. I never read those. But if the epilogue wraps up the characters of the book I just read, I enjoy them.

    1. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

      I agree. I rarely read the first chapter of another book unless I know the book is already out, and then I just load the new book and start reading it. lol

  2. Lois Avatar
    Lois

    My feelings about epilogues depend on the individual epilogue. If present, I want it to add something to the story that makes it a fuller experience for me. What I absolutely don’t want is a recitation of what I call the “begats,” a list of who married whom, who all their kids were, who those kids married, etc. etc. Particularly if setting up production of offspring and arrangement of secondary character marriages aren’t central to the main story, Surely our dear characters have more going on in their lives than begetting. (I’m one of those who find the process of begetting far more interesting than the results!). But if a character has further developed some talents or interests that took root in the main story, or some lurking problem gets resolved – now that’s something I’d welcome in an epilogue.

    1. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

      Right there with you! (Don’t read the epilogue in Behind the Mask – I was a young writer and still finding my way.) 😀

      I think the epilogue is more of a final goodbye to the characters since most everything should have been wrapped up in the main story. Maybe a peek to see if they continued to improve beyond what was required of them previously.

  3. Glynis Avatar
    Glynis

    I would always, always prefer an epilogue. I feel cheated if there isn’t one. I love to know about their children especially. So I vote for yes.

    1. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

      Though I won’t be giving a run down on children, I believe I do owe you an epilogue to bring the younger girls’ stories to a close. The idea that hit me last week when I was posting this blog was for the epilogue to come from Lydia’s viewpoint. I’m still working out exactly what to say, but I hope to get it done and to the editor before the end of the month so we can stay on track for publishing. 😉

  4. Ginna Avatar

    I’m with Lois. I really don’t care about who had what kids, in what order, and what color their hair and eyes are.

    1. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

      Yeah, that really doesn’t add to the story for me either, but some people do like it. I prefer for the epilogue to add something of content to the story, even if it isn’t entirely necessary.

  5. Alice McVeigh Avatar
    Alice McVeigh

    Not a massive fan of either prologues or epilogues. What I love to do is to wrap up characters not in the final scenes with enticing little vignettes, instead, as I did in DARCY.

  6. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

    They are not for everyone, but unfortunately, they seem to be expected in JAFF. I do like the vignette idea – I might have to play with that myself in the future. 😉

  7. Linda A. Avatar
    Linda A.

    I like epilogues, especially when they let us know what happened to some of the characters, like if Wickham disappeared and we find out he ran off to Canada or something. Or that Miss Bingley or Lady C got their just deserts, etc. I don’t like it when the epilogue is used as the introduction to the next book in a series. It needs to make me feel the MCs, and their loved ones, are moving on with their lives and will be perfectly fine without me along for the ride going forward. Something to let me know “they are fine.”

    1. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

      I like that “perfectly fine without me along for the ride” 😀
      That is a great way to think about it!

  8. cindie snyder Avatar
    cindie snyder

    I like an epilogue. I like to see where the characters lives go from the end of the story and whether they had kids. It kind of times everything together.

    1. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

      It looks like I definitely have to take up my pen and add an epilogue for An Interrupted Proposal! lol I can’t promise there were will be children mentioned, but I’ll give you a little something. 😉

  9. Don Jacobson Avatar
    Don Jacobson

    I write “An Epilogue of Sorts” to answer questions like “What happened later?” Usually, it is a scene set out of the timeline of the main novel—not something left on the cutting room floor—that does a sort of “Where are they now?” My favorite Epi was the one at the end of “Maid and Footman,” which closed a circle by pairing Margaret Cecil’s first harvest ball with the one at the center of the main action in the book.

  10. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

    I do like it when the epilogue mirrors something that happened in the main story. The epilogue in The Ball at Meryton gave Darcy an opportunity to “redo” his introduction to Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly, even though they were already married.

  11. Betty Campbell Madden Avatar
    Betty Campbell Madden

    I, for one, reader of hundreds and hundreds and more P&P variations over more than a decade, perhaps two, have a strong opinion about epilogues: Unless all the major characters die at the end of the book itself, at a minimum, I’m disappointed when I don’t learn what the future held for them. And in the extreme, unreasonable though it may be, I am angry.
    I know such additions do not reflect the style of JA and are the simply the fruit of the author’s imagination. But then, so was the variation that was the basis for the story. And I know JA didn’t close with them. So?
    If a reader doesn’t at least fleetingly wonder about that happened next, and yet, has been content to delighted with the variation itself, I think there’s a bit of self-dillusion in play. (Either that or they have real lives.) I don’t need more than who married whom, good or bad; who died shortly after the story; who had what kids–that sort of information to be satisfied.
    I realize there are real issues to face in the world, the outcome of which many of us will never know. But I stand firm that in my world of escape from those real issues, I want resolution regarding the future lives of those characters who drew me into their worlds for even a few hours.

    Are you sorry you asked. . . ?

    1. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

      I, too, am a JAFF reader of close to two decades. I find it difficult to keep up with all the new stories coming out, especially when I am either in classes or writing. As I mentioned, it is the greatest compliment that readers are unsatisfied with just the story and want to know what happened next. There was a time (Behind the Mask), when I was so thorough as to map out the family trees of the characters’ children, but now, the ideas flow too fast or life moves too quickly for me to invest the time in doing this. If it were to lead to other books, I might consider it, but I have proven myself as a very poor serial writer. 😉
      I can promise epilogues that go a bit further and provide enough information regarding the characters to give my readers some comfort or even justice (depending on the character), but I no longer dive into children and their marriages. I hope you will not be too disappointed in me. 🙂

  12. Jeff Bigler Avatar

    I agree with the idea that loose ends should be tied up in the story itself, but I get that JAFF readers expect an epilogue.

    In the one JAFF novel that I’ve published (plus my WIPs), I attempt to satisfy both viewpoints by tying up the loose ends in the story itself, but adding a 1-2 page epilogue that takes place many years in the future, giving a brief snapshot into ODC’s lives a generation later, in some way that relates to the story.

  13. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

    That is a good idea – it fulfills the expectations of the readers who want an epilogue and doesn’t have anything necessary to the story for the ones who just skip it. I look forward to reading more of your work.

  14. RobinG Avatar

    I prefer epilogues, particularly in angsty stories. There usually isn’t much exposition after the resolution, and I want to read that ODC lived a relatively happy life. If some “bad” guys didn’t receive their comeuppance in the story, I like to read that they did in the epilogue. Like many have mentioned, I don’t need a detailed listing of everyone’s kids, but to know that characters got married, had a family, had some of life’s bumps and bruises, and still lived happily is sufficient for me.

  15. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

    That is a good point, angsty stories need an “and even after all this they lived happily ever after.” I think the problem comes when the story wasn’t that angsty (like An Interrupted Proposal). But, like I said in a previous comment, I have left the younger girls’ stories unfinished, so I will be wrapping them up a bit.

  16. Glory Avatar
    Glory

    I like them as I like to see how things turned out for the characters we have an invested interest in. The nice thing is if a reader does not care for them they can just skip that part & leave it be.

    1. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

      True. Those who want to see how the characters lived can read them and those who don’t, can just close the book. 😉

  17. kayelem Avatar

    I don’t require an epilogue, and particularly dislike the sort that list all the marriages of this generation and then all the births, and then all the marriages betwixt all the little cousins… . so very boring and pointless, it can really drag down my mood from where the HEA had lifted me. once I realise that’s the sort I’m reading, I quit. (though, if it’s an ebook, I do flip the e pages to the end, to make sure the author gets all they are due from the ebook provider.)

    I do have to laugh when last chapter ties things up nicely, complete with a brief look into the future of the main characters, like a scene during their heirs marriage or something like it. The last chapter is an epilogue without being named so, and yet commenters/reviewers beg for one. Some readers don’t seem to comprehend they have that info unless they see the word as a title.

    1. Bronwen Chisholm Avatar

      I have felt a bit of the same deflation wading through an overly long epilogue and did as you do, flipping forward and skimming to see if anything interesting was dropped in there. I believe that most of the readers who wish for an epilogue are speaking of stories that close the current story but do not go much farther beyond it.

      I have just sent the epilogue for An Interrupted Proposal to the editor – it touches lightly on Darcy and Elizabeth’s happiness, but focuses mainly on Kitty, Lydia, and Georgiana. I hope everyone enjoys it.

  18. kayelem Avatar

    I’d be tempted, should I ever publish more than quick scenes, or for money, to simply always title my final chapter ‘Epilogue’.

    No matter whether it satisfies any proper definition of epilogue, it would satisfy the demands for an epilogue by that cohort readers who need to read that as a chapter title in order to accept the story is over. They will request one even if there are already 10 chapters after the resolution has completely detailing the life of the main couple up to their deaths as well as describing the courtship and marriage of every sister and the bad ends of every bad character.

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