“Mansfield Park is too dark.” Really???

Mansfield Park is too dark.” Really???

I don’t think so. How can a novel where nobody perishes, a novel where there is no scene of violence, war, destruction or self-destruction possibly be dark?

Some people do fret about the slave trade (Sir Thomas’s plantations were 99% certain to have been worked by slaves. This is mentioned exactly once.) 

 Now, there’s almost no subject on earth wickeder than slavery, and I’m 99% sure that Austen herself opposed it – though there’s no actual evidence beyond the fact that three of her brothers were well-known abolitionists. 

However, Sir Thomas is never represented as a wicked slaveholder. Instead, he’s portrayed as rigid, unimaginative and a little humourless but still conscientious and caring. Even when angered – whether justifiably about Lovers’ Vows messing up his property or unfairly about Fanny’s refusal of Mr Crawford – he appears humane, mannerly and self-controlled. As even Mary Crawford acknowledges at one point, “He is just what the head of such a house should be. Nay, in sober sadness, now I love you all!” 

Another supposedly “dark” part of Mansfield Park is the “cruelty” of sending poor children away from their parents to their richer relatives – despite this generally gifting them more comfortable life outcomes. (This fate befalls Frank Churchill in Emma. Frank Churchill was adopted by the Churchills and given their name – yet still, somehow Emma isn’t generally considered “dark”.) 

In fact, one of the Jane Austen’s own brothers – Edward, was adopted similarly, greatly to his benefit. Jane Austen, to whom Edward was always generous, probably considered this practice as beneficial – as it certainly was for Fanny (and later, her sister Susan) in Mansfield Park.

Of course, not every child plucked from the bosom of their family was as lucky as the real Edward Austen and the fictional Frank Churchill. Some were certainly exploited – as unpaid child-minders, errand-runners, scullery maids, farm hands etc. But then, most children in the Regency era were exploited, simply because most people were exploited. Really, by considering Austen’s parents cruel for relinquishing Edward, or the Prices heartless for relinquishing Fanny, we’re guilty of judging something two hundred years ago with bang-up to date, 2024 eyes. 

But the Crawfords are wicked! some readers complain. The Crawfords make Mansfield Park so dark!

And here – I have to admit – these readers have a point. 

Henry behaved with remarkable wickedness when committing adultery – but I refuse to consider Mary Crawford as wicked. She loved Edmund (and, yes, pursued him) but only when they were both single. There’s nothing illegal, immoral or fattening about that.

Of course, we as readers are pulling for Fanny instead – Fanny, who had loved Edmund not only very much longer than Mary but very much more deeply – so Mary’s pursuit can it feel immoral (if not fattening). 

However, Mary never perceives that Fanny loves Edmund. Mary is no Lucy Steele, purposefully and maliciously twisting the knife in poor Elinor Dashwood’s wounds by confiding her own secret engagement to the man Elinor loves. 

In other words, given that Mary Crawford never guesses Fanny’s closely-guarded secret, where is the wickedness in her pursuing a decent-but-not-loaded guy like Edmund Bertram – especially when she might very well have married far more advantageously?  The complex and intriguing Mary Crawford is certainly no fortune-hunter. Instead, she is shocked by her own feelings as the play progresses. Had she ever actually married Edmund I suspect she would have improved enormously. 

But wait, I hear you cry, what about the darkest part of Mansfield Park – horrid Mrs Norris, the aunt from hell? 

Well, she’s never going to win a prize for Miss Congeniality. She patronises her younger sisters’ poverty-stricken offspring and idolises her elder sister’s spoiled and privileged offspring. She’s a hopeless busybody (that green baize!) and a vile stirrer, always up for hurting others, tone-deaf to anyone else’s pain. Also, she’s not only consistently mean to Fanny – but she certainly assists in pushing Maria into a disastrous union with Mr Rushworth.

On the other hand, Aunt Norris is also widowed, childless and sunk to a poorer position than she’d once enjoyed. She also winds up lonely and unhappy – her selfishness, like Maria’s lack of self-control, is unquestionably punished. Also, all the rudeness in the world doesn’t equate to wickedness.

 There are plenty of unpleasant people who aren’t wicked. They can be sanctimonious and unpleasant, or silly and unpleasant, or arrogant and unpleasant, or manipulative and unpleasant – and still not qualify as wicked. The only wickedness in Mansfield Park – besides the unspoken but potent half-shadow of slavery – is Maria and Crawford’s adultery. (Which changes everything.)

One can argue that Mrs Norris is over-punished and – as Austen herself wryly admitted – Henry Crawford under-punished, but they’re still both punished as, of course, is Maria. 

Still, we have a heartwarming HEA and a lovely wedding at the close, along with a great deal of acute observation of human nature, stunning plotting, marvellous pacing and brilliant dialogue to enjoy along the way.

Like Persuasion, it takes a certain level of emotional maturity – and perhaps even actual age – to love Mansfield Park. It doesn’t effortlessly seduce its readers, as Pride and Prejudice does. I’m often struck, on social media, by readers saying, “At last I’m enjoying Mansfield Park/Emma/Persuasion!”  

In other words, they disliked them once but they “get” them now. The books themselves haven’t altered, though. Instead as Heraclitus said, “No man can step twice into the same river.” The river has moved on… and so has the man. 

So, if you’ve read Mansfield Park, and not enjoyed it, or thought it “too dark” remember Mark Twain’s famous quip about the British weather:

 “If you don’t like the weather, just wait a little.”

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15 responses to ““Mansfield Park is too dark.” Really???”

  1. Amanda Kai Avatar
    Amanda Kai

    I think a large part of people’s perception is owed to the 1998 movie adaptation, which takes a LOT of liberties in showing Sir Thomas’ abuse of his slaves in Antigua. More than one person has told me they find that version to be “ick” and that they disliked Mansfield Park for it, not knowing that the book barely mentions his affairs in the West Indies and certainly does not portray him as a cruel master.

  2. Alice McVeigh Avatar

    You’re a fund of useful information, Amanda!!!! I’m NOT an adaptation fan – they all mess up SOMETHING, some more than others – but have never heard of this one. I hadn’t a clue that the director had not only guessed – probably correctly – that Sir Thomas’s plantation was worked by slaves, but also – almost certainly incorrectly, as he simply wasn’t the type – that he was a cruel and abusive master.

    And people wonder why I don’t care for adaptations!!!

  3. Glynis Avatar
    Glynis

    I really can’t remember if I read this when I was younger but I bought a compendium of Jane’s works when in my late fifties and I did read it then. I have also watched a couple of different versions but couldn’t really enjoy them (especially the one with Billie Piper as Fanny!) However as much as I agree with your words, I still really don’t like this book and won’t be reading it again.

  4. Alice McVeigh Avatar
    Alice McVeigh

    No worries, Glynis. You’ve given it EVERY chance – and at different periods of your life, as well. I guess it’s just not your favourite style of book. As for Billie Piper as Fanny, I can’t even BEGIN to imagine it…

    1. Amanda Kai Avatar
      Amanda Kai

      As egregious as the 1998 movie was, I hated the Billie Piper version even more. Too much that they changed or cut, and while Billie is a great actor, she didn’t fit the personality of Fanny at all.

      Best screen adaptation of MP, in my opinion is the 1983 BBC miniseries, which, while quaint and in that 80’s historical drama style (much like the other BBC adaptations from around the same time) is a fairly faithful adaptation of the book.

      But I completely understand if you still do not enjoy Mansfield Park, Glynis. Not every Jane Austen book speaks to us the same, and I don’t think it’s wrong to have a least favorite one.

  5. cindie snyder Avatar
    cindie snyder

    I think it was a bit dark but I’ll have to re-read it to be sure.It has been a while since I read it. I don’t think I would like the movies they don’t sound very good.

    1. Amanda Kai Avatar
      Amanda Kai

      Just watch the 1983 miniseries if you watch any adaptations of it. It’s the best one, even if a little old fashioned feeling. We seriously need a GOOD Mansfield Park movie with great acting, scenery, music, but doesnt destroy the plot. ’83 one is only one that comes close, IMO.

      1. Anya Avatar

        I will have to out look for that miniseries. I know generally everyone’s favorite P&P is 1995, but I’m partial to the 1980 BBC adaptation. Very faithful to the book. (I just finished A Favorable Impression, enjoyed it very much.)

      2. Amanda Kai Avatar
        Amanda Kai

        Aww, thank you! I’m so glad you enjoyed it.

    2. Alice McVeigh Avatar
      Alice McVeigh

      Hi Cindie and thanks to you and to ALL who’ve responded to my blog here:
      THANK YOU!!!!

  6. Kirstin Odegaard Avatar

    Great points. I don’t think of Mansfield Park as dark, either–more as one of Austen’s more serious works. Austen has that quote where she calls Pride and Prejudice “rather too light & bright & sparkling,” and then she follows it up with MP, which feels heavier on the morality. I always imagine Austen thought she needed this correction. (But, I mean, it’s hard not to love P and P for being so light and bright and sparkling.)

  7. Alice McVeigh Avatar
    Alice McVeigh

    Thanks, Kirstin, for yet another insightful comment!!!

  8. Jean Avatar
    Jean

    I loved the commentary! I never thought of any of the Jane Austen works as “dark.” Perhaps there were a few dark elements in each book, but life is full of “dark” elements, without it making me feel hopeless despair. Most books have drama. I certainly appreciate your approach to dispelling the theory that Mansfield Park is “dark.” It is one of my favorites because it is one of Jane Austen’s more angst filled books.

    1. Alice McVeigh Avatar
      Alice McVeigh

      Hi Jean, Thanks sooooo much for this. I think that’s one of the reasons WHY Mansfield Park is so good – to use your word, the ‘drama’.

      Fanny is Austen’s ONLY heroine born into a truly vulnerable position. Born into a lower social class, she is absolutely dependent – small wonder if she is shy, unassertive, fearful and all the other complaints Austen fans make about her on social media!!!!

      And yes, things could have gone horribly wrong. (Sir Thomas could have attempted to force her into an unwanted marriage, for example.) Instead, there is just enough angst for interest, and to make the HEA believable. For me, it’s not only a masterpiece but also a MASTERCLASS (in composition, pacing etc.) I am constantly reading it to admire and to learn.

  9. Karana Apals Avatar
    Karana Apals

    I definitely don’t read any darkness in it. Yes, she had a very poor family, but it was very common to send children away for financial reasons in those times. And it had a happily ever after. If you want to see darkness, read the Bronte sisters.

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