Excerpt from “Elizabeth Bennet’s Bad Days” Part 2

From Gianna Thomas

As Jane joined Elizabeth in their bedroom, she noticed that her sister’s eyes were shiny with tears.

“Are you well, Lizzy?”

“No, I’m not. I shouldn’t have allowed Lydia’s theft to upset me so.”

“Perhaps not, but I can understand why her pilfering prompted such a drastic action. I wonder if she’ll think twice in the future before…”

“I doubt it. Mama has let her do anything and everything she has ever demanded since the nursery, and now she has no respect for others’ rights or property. I fear, that soon, Lydia will be so selfish that she will do something that will ruin us all. When younger, I was occasionally referred to as a hoyden, but I soon realized my conduct was not showing love to the rest of my family, and I have endeavored to change my ways. I never want to harm my parents or sisters in any manner simply because I covet something held by another.”

“You are wiser than Lydia and are certainly being more judicious than Mama. I just wish Papa would stick to his word when doling out discipline to Lydia. I fear that Mama will browbeat him into allowing her to go to the assembly tonight, and that if she attends, she will embarrass us all.”

“Let us hope that he does not change his mind. We all will suffer if he does.”

As they talked, both girls quickly dressed and arranged each other’s hair. Jane and Elizabeth had lost time to dress more slowly when they had to confront their youngest sister and yet knew that their mother would soon be ready to leave.

Both young ladies startled when Mrs. Bennet stuck her head in the door.

“Girls, girls, hurry up. We will be late otherwise, and I promised Lady Lucas I would speak with her upon arrival at the assembly.”

“Lydia, Kitty, and Mary come downstairs immediately.” Their mother proceeded to bustle down the hall and then descend the stairway to make sure that Hill had ordered the family carriage.

Elizabeth and Jane just looked at each other and grimaced. The result of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet’s discussion was that Lydia Bennet would be attending the assembly as her father, the only male in a household of women, would always take the easy way out.

Without speaking, both young ladies determined to keep an eye on their youngest sister lest she spoil the whole evening for everyone.

One last check in the mirror and both were ready to go down the stairs themselves. Grabbing their wraps, they hurried to catch up to their mother at the Bennet carriage, and all were soon on their way to the assembly hall.


As it so happened, as the ladies descended their carriage, the first set had already begun. Gay music filtered out the front doors of the assembly hall, and the happy voices and clapping hands of those inside could be heard beyond the entrance.

Lydia made sure she was the first to arrive inside, and she squealed with delight to find that the men of the militia were in attendance. “Kitty, Kitty, Mr. Denny and that handsome Captain Carter are both here. I plan to dance all evening long.”

“Oh, and I plan too as well.”

Although the youngest, Lydia led her older sister Kitty as to their adventures. If there was mischief afoot, Lydia had instigated it, and Kitty would submissively follow her lead. If they got in trouble for their actions, Lydia would blame Kitty as she was the eldest and should have had better sense than to become involved in something of which their parents would disapprove.

“Mama, Kitty and Lydia are flirting with the officers, and Lady Lucas and Mrs. Long are looking disapprovingly at them.”

“Jane, there is nothing wrong with some harmless flirting. Lydia and Kitty are just young and enjoying the evening. Besides a little bit of flirting is how I won your father.” With that, Mrs. Bennet turned and hurried toward Lady Lucas to enquire about the latest tenant at Netherfield. A young man of large fortune had leased it and was to attend tonight’s assembly with twelve young ladies and six young men from London, and she was bound and determined that her girls would meet all the men in order to find husbands. Unfortunately, Mrs. Bennet was a nonsensical woman with only one thought on her mind: marry off all her daughters to rich men so that one of them would ensure that Mrs. Bennet was not thrown into the hedgerows when Mr. Bennet left this mortal coil. Despite him being in good health and taking steps to live a long life, his wife was determined that he would probably pass within the next fortnight. With Longbourn entailed to a distant cousin, whom her husband hated, Mrs. Bennet was firmly convinced the man would throw all the Bennet woman out of their house to shift for themselves. And with Mr. Bennet being more than a bit indolent concerning his income and caring for his girls’ futures, Mrs. Bennet’s fears were understandable.


“Lady Lucas, Lady Lucas, have you heard if the Netherfield party is to attend tonight?”

“Mrs. Bennet, do not get your feathers ruffled. I have been assured that Mr. Bingley and the Netherfield party will attend tonight. I heard that there will be several young men and women with him including his two sisters and a brother-in-law. Sir William verified this earlier today.”

“Oh, but there will be several women with them? I hoped only Mr. Bingley’s sisters would be attending. My daughters must meet Mr. Bingley and any of the other men with him. I hope they are unattached. Mr. Bingley surely will fall in love with my Jane. She is the loveliest lady in the county.”

“Now, now, Mrs. Bennet. We all know that Jane is lovely, but she is also past her majority. Why has she not married before now?”

Mrs. Bennet raised her eyebrows and bristled at her friend. “Lady Lucas, you know she has had several young men interested in courting her, but all failed to follow through which was to Jane’s favor as she was not in love with any of them. She is determined to marry only for the greatest love…and I despair she will never marry at all if she continues to be too selective.”

Lady Lucas just smiled, and although she was Fanny Bennet’s friend, she also knew that at least one of the young men had run from Jane because of her grasping, determined mother. Mrs. Bennet was unaware that she was the cause of her eldest daughter’s single status and would have been shocked if she had been apprised of it. However, if she had been made aware, she probably would not have changed her approach to any young man who showed interest in any of her daughters. Although Mr. Bennet had married a great beauty, he rued the day that he had found one with an empty head. The only redeeming thing he had found about his wife was that she did love her daughters and wanted the best for them.


It was in the middle of a lively set of Tythe Pig when a small party of finely dressed individuals entered the assembly hall. Elizabeth and Jane looked up as the music wound to a stop and all turned to observe the newcomers. Sir William Lucas was immediately at the entrance to welcome the three men and two women.

“Mr. Bingley, it is so good to see you and your family and guest this evening. I hope you will enjoy the dancing and meeting some of the local families. We have a close community here, but visitors are always welcome. Let me introduce you to some of the families when this dance is completed.”

“Thank you, Sir William. We appreciate your warm welcome. Perhaps we can get some punch before the introductions.”

Although Mr. Bingley was taller than most, he was not as tall as his guest, Mr. Darcy. Where Mr. Darcy was very dark in coloring and very haughty in countenance, Mr. Bingley was ginger-haired and all smiles. He loved to dance and looked forward to meeting some of the young ladies of the neighborhood. However, of the entire party, he was the only one who looked happy to be there.

The two ladies were fashionably dressed but frowned and looked upon all the audience with disdain. The third man, Mr. Hurst, who turned out to be the eldest sister’s husband, yawned and just looked bored until he spied the punch bowl and proceeded to test the refreshments to see if they lived up to his standards.

For the moment, the dance recommenced and proceeded until the end and was roundly applauded at the finish. As those in Mr. Bingley’s party had gotten refreshments and had no interest in the introductions, Mr. Bingley was the only one to stand with Sir William. And Mrs. Bennet made sure that she and her daughters were the first to meet the handsome young man.

“Mr. Bingley, may I introduce you to Mrs. Bennet and her lovely daughters Miss Bennet, Miss Elizabeth, Miss Mary, Miss Catherine, and Miss Lydia.”

Mr. Bingley’s chest swelled, and he grinned from ear to ear as he laid eyes on the most beautiful lady he had ever seen. Forgetting to acknowledge the others, he turned and bowed to Miss Bennet and asked her if she was free for the next set to which Jane said ‘yes’ and then blushed prettily.

Finally remembering his manners, Bingley bowed and acknowledged Mrs. Bennet and the rest of her girls. However, Jane’s mother did not take offense. She had recognized Bingley’s interest in her eldest and was more than pleased. She began thinking about when the marriage could occur and how many would attend the wedding breakfast. In a matter of minutes, she was seeing her dreams for her eldest daughter come true and her own future being secured by a wealthy son-in-law.


At the back of the room and near the refreshment table, Bingley’s party stood apart and conversed among themselves.

Darcy had rolled his eyes when Bingley was being introduced to the Bennets. He had taken one look at Mrs. Bennet and thought he recognized the mother bear type who would not only protect her daughters but would also do everything in her power to see that they married well. He had endured that type of woman ever since entering the marriage mart. The Ton in London was comprised of grasping shrews who bred the same and were willing to even help their daughters to compromise wealthy men to ensure marriages to those with money and power. He himself had managed to avoid three attempts at compromise by the skin of his teeth. Ever since the first attempt, he had learned to keep his guest room doors locked and his valet always close by especially late into the night. Determined not to be a victim, he also decided he would never allow himself to be found in a compromise. He would never marry anyone who attempted such a thing either.


Elizabeth and Charlotte Lucas, Sir William and Lady Lucas’ eldest daughter, had sat out the last few sets and were back a short way from the Netherfield party. Both women were a bit shocked when Mr. Bingley began encouraging Mr. Darcy to dance.

“Come, Darcy. I must have you dance. I hate to see you standing about by yourself in this stupid manner. You had much better dance.”

“I certainly shall not. You know how I detest it unless I am particularly acquainted with my partner. At such an assembly as this it would be insupportable. Your sisters are engaged, and there is not another woman in the room whom it would not be a punishment to me to stand up with.”

“I would not be so fastidious as you are,” cried Mr. Bingley, “for a kingdom. Upon my honor, I never met with so many pleasant girls in my life as I have this evening; and there are several of them you see uncommonly pretty.”

“You are dancing with the only handsome girl in the room,” said Mr. Darcy, looking at the eldest Miss Bennet.

“Oh! She is the most beautiful creature I ever beheld! But there is one of her sisters sitting down just behind you, who is very pretty, and I dare say very agreeable. Do let me ask my partner to introduce you.”

“Which do you mean?” Mr. Darcy turned and stared until he caught Elizabeth’s eye.

“Bingley, she is tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt me. I am in no humor at present to give consequence to young ladies who are slighted by other men. You had better return to your partner and enjoy her smiles, for you are wasting your time with me.”

“Darcy, lower your voice.”

“Why should I? It should be plain to everyone that I am in no mood to dance this evening.”

Bingley rolled his eyes. “Your insulting comment was probably heard by several of the participants around us including Miss Elizabeth,” said he with a quieter voice.

Darcy just shook his head while Elizabeth Bennet rose to her feet.


“Eliza, just ignore him. He is not worth the effort.”

Elizabeth just smiled at her childhood friend, and Charlotte knew they were in trouble.

“Come, Charlotte.”


Unfortunately, Charlotte Lucas’ attempt to stop her friend was ineffective as Elizabeth kept walking toward the Netherfield men.

When the two women drew nigh to Darcy and Bingley, Elizabeth stopped her friend with a tug to her arm.

Elizabeth then proceeded to smile at Mr. Darcy and beginning at his head, she perused him from head to toe.


Elizabeth’s smile grew even wider. “Yes, very handsome.”

“Eliza…” Charlotte spoke through gritted teeth and tugged on her friend’s arm.

The second eldest Bennet daughter continued to ignore her friend’s distress and planted both feet firmly on the floor.

“Yes, very handsome. I don’t believe I have ever seen such a handsome set of men’s clothes before. They must be from the best tailor in London. Even the dancing shoes have a spit polish shine to them. Yes, very handsome, I must say.”

“Eliza…” Charlotte was getting frantic rapidly as she knew her friend was preparing for the coup de grâce.

“However, the male who is wearing them is really not…not handsome enough to tempt me to dance.”

Charlotte felt she would swoon at any minute if Elizabeth didn’t close her mouth.

“Charlotte, I find that after sitting out two sets, to allow other young women an opportunity to dance tonight since there is such a dearth of men because of Napoleon’s antics, that I am rather thirsty. Earlier, your father was praising the punch as being the best we have ever had at an assembly, and I suggest that we try some. Come, my friend.”

Although Charlotte was about to tear at her hair in vexation of Elizabeth’s comments, she just sighed in resignation, and the two young women headed toward the refreshment area.

Charles Bingley guffawed and turned to his very irritated friend.

“Darce, you deserved that a thousand times over,” and Bingley doubled over in laughter.

“Quiet, Bingley,” said a ruffled Darcy.

Consequently, all the gossips sitting close by who heard Miss Elizabeth’s comments concerning the haughty Mr. Darcy proceeded to spread the word throughout the assembly for the remainder of the evening. The result was continual pockets of laughter throughout the hall with individuals looking towards the red-faced visitor.

To Caroline Bingley’s chagrin, Darcy was embarrassed enough by all the whispers around him that he left the assembly early, returned to Netherfield, and sent the carriage back to the assembly hall for Bingley and the rest of his family.

He was not missed by anyone except those from his own party.

4 responses to “Excerpt from “Elizabeth Bennet’s Bad Days” Part 2”

  1. Gwen Avatar

    Great start. I look forward to reading the book. When do you anticipate publishing it?

  2. Gianna Thomas Avatar
    Gianna Thomas

    Thank you, Gwen. I hope to publish February or March. I’ve been trying to publish it for a while but recently realized that I am recuperating from Long Covid which has symptoms of brain fog, etc. I have certain chapters already in my head and am working on connecting the whole book into what I think will be one of the best I’ve written so far. It’s just coming together a little slower than I expected due to the Covid. It’s really a stinker to deal with, but I’m thankful that I was fortunate to have had a mild case. It just takes time for all the symptoms to go away. 🙂

  3. kimbelle1 Avatar

    I would say that your Elizabeth delivered a most excellent set-down, and that you will make many of us smile when he must face her again, for it is certainly to be something none of us have ever conceived! What fun!

    1. Gianna Thomas Avatar
      Gianna Thomas

      Glad you enjoyed it, Kim. This particular P&P version will identify with Austen’s original, but then again, it will have some surprising differences as well.

      And just how badly can Caroline Bingley act? Pretty bad. Find out exactly how bad in EBBD which I hope to publish in late April. Still having a bit of foggy brain from COVID which is a nuisance.

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