Simply Beautiful

Past, Present, and Future Felicities

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More often than not, my search for the perfect Jane Austen quote to serve as the epigraph for a new story begins during the pre-publication stage. I always find something Austen wrote that perfectly encapsulates my book’s underlying theme. In the case of Simply Beautiful, I chose the following:

“Think only of the past as its remembrance gives you pleasure.”

In Simply Beautiful, Miss Elizabeth Bennet’s past is marked by broken family ties and lingering disquiet, due to extended years away from her father. However, Elizabeth’s commendable trait of embracing her past, not through the prism of bitterness, but with a heart brimming with joy that fuels her courage to confront an unpredictable future, is the hallmark of the story.

Elizabeth’s confrontation is not solely with her past. She also wrestles with her present, caught in a whirlwind of family obligations, societal expectations, and her own evolving feelings. By clinging to the pleasant memories of the past, she gains the strength to navigate the uncertain path that lies ahead with grace and conviction.

Here’s an excerpt from Simply Beautiful that I hope you will enjoy.

Chapter Five

The following days hurried by. Elizabeth and Mr. Bennet were in a haze of activity. It was arduous to explain the reasons for his departure years prior while also trying to lay a foundation for their future as father and daughter. Nevertheless, Bennet found it amazing to share stories with her.

I sense a growing bond emerging between us, particularly over our shared love of reading. Indeed, it is an honor getting to know my Lizzy again.

Bennet could not have been more pleased by how his only child had turned out. Indeed, the Darcys had done an excellent job raising Elizabeth, just as they promised him they would when he made the gut-wrenching decision to leave her in their care at Pemberley a decade ago.

Elizabeth was indeed accomplished as one would have expected, having been raised by the daughter of an earl and one of the most esteemed gentlemen in Derbyshire.

If he could find but one fault in the arrangement, it was the close connection between Elizabeth and the Darcys’ son and heir, Fitzwilliam. It did not sit well with him how close the two young people were, what with the young man being Elizabeth’s senior by four years.

Bennet had long believed no such occasions existed for the two to grow so close, for a man at young Darcy’s age was often away from his home. Surely someone of his stature, whose acquaintances were always increasing, had no reason to concern himself with his parents’ ward during those opportunities that afforded his return to Pemberley.

The evidence before him suggested otherwise. Obviously, the young people were remarkably close. The young man was extremely attentive to Elizabeth, his eyes rarely straying from her. Likewise, Elizabeth seemed to rely too much on the young man, giving Bennet much cause for concern.

Bennet knew the Darcys too well for his concern to be deemed unwarranted. He dared not speak for the young man and his feelings. He secretly wished the young man’s doting on Elizabeth was akin to an older, overly protective brother.

Young Darcy, no doubt, deems me a threat to my own daughter. Keeping a watchful eye on her when we are together, even from a distance, as though he were jealous because his presumed role as Elizabeth’s long-time protector diminishes with each passing day.

As for Elizabeth’s feelings, Bennet was not so sure. Young girls want nothing more than to be in love, and the look he saw in his daughter’s eyes whenever she looked at young Darcy evinced all the telltale signs of infatuation. What a precarious position in which to find oneself.

Bennet knew enough about Lady Anne Darcy and her ilk to know that she would never countenance an alliance between her only son and Elizabeth. It did not matter that she raised Elizabeth and the connection between them could be likened to that of a mother and daughter. He knew that Lady Anne had far grander plans for her son’s future. She had decided long ago who the next mistress of Pemberley would be. Only a young woman with a large fortune and noble blood coursing through her veins would be deemed good enough for young Darcy. Said person was firmly settled in Lady Anne’s mind as her niece and namesake, Miss Anne de Bourgh.

Who that knew the noble lady did not know that? No doubt young Darcy would honor his mother’s favorite wish for him. That was simply how it was for people of their ilk who often entertained the idea of marriage for wealth and connection instead of marriage based on love.

Why, even the Darcys’ marriage had been born out of an arrangement, with Gerald Darcy’s large fortune more than compensating for his lack of nobility.

His daughter Elizabeth had not a single drop of noble blood as far as Thomas Bennet knew. She surely had no fortune. No, Lady Anne will never accept Lizzy as a potential daughter-in-law.

So, where does that leave my daughter if it is indeed true that she is in love with the young heir? Bennet silently questioned. Ripe for future heartbreak was the only conclusion he could draw, leading him to but one decision.

I must carry my Lizzy away from all this before it is too late and she ends up suffering from a broken heart brought on by disappointed hopes.

Bennet could have no doubt that he had been Elizabeth’s greatest source of disappointment for the past several years. All of the promises he had made were promises subsequently broken.

Truth be told, every time he resolved to put the past behind him and bury the memories of the fatal carriage accident that had altered his world in such a devastating and tragic way, his troubles would assail him, returning with a vengeance. They denied him and robbed him of his resolve to be a better man and a better father, without fail, every single time.

All of that is behind me now, now that I know what I must do. My Lizzy does not belong here living among these people. She belongs at Longbourn Village, where she was born and reared for the first part of her life, amid her own kin.

It had been over a year since he had had his last drink. He had even forgone imbibing port with his friend after dinner, opting for conversation instead—confirmation of his having conquered his demons once and for all. Now he was even more determined to be the type of father who would protect his daughter. The kind of father she deserved.

He stared out the window and took in the sweeping landscape. Pemberley was indeed a magnificent estate.

I cannot give her all this, but I can provide her with something far better, in my humble opinion. I can give her a sense of her own self, her roots, a place where she really belongs.

Mr. Bennet settled into the leather armchair in Pemberley’s library, his crinkled hands clasped over the rich leather binding of a book. He sighed as he looked up at his daughter, who had been browsing the shelves restlessly.

“Lizzy,” he said tentatively, “it is time for you to return to Longbourn.”

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62 responses to “Past, Present, and Future Felicities”

  1. Marsha Avatar
    Marsha

    This reads amazingly. When does this come out? Definitely want to know if Lizzy goes back to Lomgbourn or stay with the Darcy’s. Does Mr Bennet cause trouble?? So many questions, thanks for letting us know about this

    1. Rhonda Avatar

      What a fascinating premise! What would Darcy choose to do if his parents were alive? He would not have all the burdens of caring for his sister (and the Ramsgate event), but all the opinions of family weigh much stronger. Looking forward to this one!

      1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
        P. O. Dixon

        Thanks, Rhonda! Great observations about Darcy. I hope you’ll enjoy the story.

    2. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      It’s my pleasure, Marsha. I’m delighted by your enthusiasm. Simply Beautiful is available now! I hope you’ll enjoy the story.

    3. Nancy W Avatar
      Nancy W

      A premise with them growing up together, Darcy’s parents are alive and Lizzy is the only child, how interesting! Would love to see how it goes!

      1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
        P. O. Dixon

        Thanks! An interesting premise, indeed. I hope you’ll enjoy the story.

  2. carylkane Avatar
    carylkane

    I’m all astonishment! I’m looking forward to reading Simply Beautiful!

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much for your kind words. I hope you’ll enjoy the story.

  3. Ginna Avatar
    Ginna

    I’m eager to learn more about the story. I want to know why Elizabeth has been separate from her family. I look forward to reading it!

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks for your kind words. The circumstances of Elizabeth’s being at Pemberley are incredibly sad. That said, I really hope you’ll love how the story unfolds.

  4. editingzeal Avatar
    editingzeal

    I think you have another winner here, Pam.
    Betty Campbell Madden

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much for your kind words, Betty. I hope you’ll love the story.

  5. Julie Goodman Avatar
    Julie Goodman

    Wow, cannot wait to read this! Brilliant idea!

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much. I hope you’ll love how the story unfolds.

  6. Patricia Finnegan Avatar
    Patricia Finnegan

    Looking forward to reading this! When does it come out?

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thank you! Simply Beautiful is available now. I hope you’ll love the story.

  7. Susan Derrick Robinson Avatar
    Susan Derrick Robinson

    Cannot wait to read this!!! I love all of P.O. Dixons books!!!

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thank you for reading and enjoying all my stories. I hope you’ll love Simply Beautiful just as much.

  8. Beverly Laude Avatar
    Beverly Laude

    Sounds like a great book!

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thank you! I hope you will enjoy the story.

  9. Glory Avatar
    Glory

    I love the color on cover. I have this added to my wishlist. I have enjoyed your other stories so I am sure this one will be excellent too.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks for your kind words and for reading and enjoying my stories. I’m really drawn to the color on the cover. I hope you’ll love how the story unfolds.

  10. Jennifer Cuff Avatar
    Jennifer Cuff

    I am excited to read this one. I love a new take on old characters.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much. I’ve been thinking of these new characterizations for quite a while. I hope you’ll love how the story unfolds.

  11. Trish Avatar
    Trish

    What a wonderful premise! I look forward to reading this book.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks for your kind words. I’m glad you like the premise. I hope you’ll enjoy the story.

  12. cindie snyder Avatar
    cindie snyder

    Loved the excerpt! What a neat premise I wonder what Lizzy’s reaction will be to going back to Longbourne?lol

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much! That’s a great question about Elizabeth. I hope you’ll love how things unfold.

  13. Tina Avatar
    Tina

    I’m interested in discovering if Lady Anne has deeper feelings towards Elizabeth than Mr. Bennet imagines. This sounds like another good read by this author.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks! I really hope you’ll love the dynamics between Lady Anne and Elizabeth—and between Elizabeth and her father as well. Enjoy!

  14. Linda A. Avatar
    Linda A.

    What a unique premise. I’m curious to see how you work things out for ODC.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks! An ODC happily ever after is guaranteed. I hope you’ll enjoy how the story unfolds.

  15. Sarah P Avatar
    Sarah P

    Great snippet, and definitely an unusual premise. Can’t wait to read what happens next especially if Mr Bennet brings Elizabeth home to Longbourn, thus separating her from young Darcy.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed the excerpt. I hope you’ll love the story just as much.

  16. cbbsadventures Avatar

    Wow, loved the excerpt and looking forward to reading the first 4 chapters. I love the ‘what if’ stories; canon characters are thee, but sometimes a little different in character; the same places are there, and of course there are new additions. I am looking forward to reading your story.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much! I’m delighted to know you’re looking forward to reading the story. I hope you’ll love it.

  17. darcybennett Avatar

    Really enjoyed this book and left a review. Hope it gets the attention it deserves. Congrats on the release!

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much for reading and enjoying the story and for leaving such a wonderful review. It means the world to me.

  18. Debby Sangiovanni Avatar
    Debby Sangiovanni

    Uh Oh…I detect some real heartbreak here, and not just from the past. Already I feel sorry for Mr. Bennet and Elizabeth. Then there’s poor Mr. Darcy whose mother is still alive and apparently has plans of her own? How is Darcy going to work his way around that one! The excerpt has me quite intrigued and I look forward to reading it.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much for your insightful comment. I’ve described the story as heartbreaking and heartwarming. I hope you love how the story unfolds.

  19. Lois Avatar
    Lois

    Looks like a great premise!

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks! I hope you’ll enjoy the story.

  20. Buturot Avatar
    Buturot

    Thank you for sharing. Wonder who the true villain will be in this story. Looking forward to reading this.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      It’s my pleasure. I hope you’ll enjoy the story.

  21. Jessica Lowery Avatar
    Jessica Lowery

    Congratulations! Looking forward to reading this. Love your work!

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much for your kind words! I hope you’ll love Simply Beautiful.

  22. Melanie Höhnke Avatar
    Melanie Höhnke

    Congratulations fo the release. I just finished the book today (review is soon to follow) and enjoyed it very much, first of all the close realtionship between Darcy and Elizabeth. Thank you very much for this very different story which was really good, as all your books are.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much for your kind words and for writing such a lovely review of Simply Beautiful. I must admit; I loved depicting ODC in such a warm and caring relationship from the start. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story.

  23. Kathryn Rady Avatar
    Kathryn Rady

    Ok, it’s unusual for me to pay full retail for a book unless I know the author personally but I’m pretty sure this is going to be that exception that proves the rule. Very intriguing beginning. Now I want to read what Lizzy things, what Darcy thinks and what Lady Anne thinks about all this.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      I’m delighted to know you’re looking forward to more. I hope you’ll love how the story unfolds.

  24. editingzeal Avatar
    editingzeal

    I don’t need to read a sample to know I’ll like it: you wrote it, didn’t you; and you focused on ODC, didn’t you? So it’s a winner with me, Pam.
    Betty Campbell Madden

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks, Betty! It means so much to me to hear you say that. This story is one that I started in November 2021 as my NaNoWriMo writing project. I’m so happy to have it out in the world.

  25. Trish Avatar
    Trish

    This sounds wonderful! The cover art is beautiful too.

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thank you! I’m delighted to know you like the cover. I hope you’ll enjoy the story.

  26. Nancy W Avatar
    Nancy W

    A premise with them growing up together, Darcy’s parents are alive and Lizzy is the only child, how interesting! Would love to see how it goes!

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks, Nancy! I hope you’ll love how the story goes.

  27. Terri Avatar
    Terri

    Wow! Glad I got the chance to read this excerpt. I have many, many questions now and it seems like ODC are being set up for immediate disappointment and for Elizabeth, reconciling her past. This chapter is very well written and edited, which makes the joy of reading a good JAFF that much better!

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much for your kind words. I really appreciate your enthusiasm. I hope you’ll love how the story unfolds.

  28. Luisa1111 Avatar
    Luisa1111

    Congratulations! I always love a story where ODC doesn’t have so many obstacles to forming a friendship. But it sounds as if there will be plenty of tension & some major family obstacles. Can’t wait to read it

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks so much! I hope you’ll love the story.

  29. Lisa P Avatar
    Lisa P

    Fascinating trope, & in all my JAFF reading, not one I’ve come across before. I want to know how the story starts, and how it resolves!

    1. P. O. Dixon Avatar
      P. O. Dixon

      Thanks, Lisa! I’m delighted to know you’re looking forward to reading the story. I hope you will love how it unfolds.

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